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The following is an idea for a book by Nadia R:
The Great Fire of London
The fire blazed on and on,it was never ending. People were ordered out of their homes to try and block the fire's way. Women were carrying children and belongings, whilst the men dealt with the fire. Everywhere children and babies were screaming and crying. The smell of smoke was burning my nostrils. But I just watched and listened.
By Nadia R
Age 10 years
Class:5sw
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2 comments:
Another great opening Nadia! I can't wait for your next peice of writing!!
Hi you don't know me but i'm a year six boy from Robartes junior school and that is absolutely brillo-whizz!
I hate cliffhangers so please, please write some more to that!
Brandon.
P. S. please!
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