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Monday 17 November 2008

"The Great Fire of London' by Nadia R, Age 10, Class 5sw

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The following is an idea for a book by Nadia R:

The Great Fire of London


The fire blazed on and on,it was never ending. People were ordered out of their homes to try and block the fire's way. Women were carrying children and belongings, whilst the men dealt with the fire. Everywhere children and babies were screaming and crying. The smell of smoke was burning my nostrils. But I just watched and listened.


By Nadia R
Age 10 years

Class:5sw
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2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Another great opening Nadia! I can't wait for your next peice of writing!!

Anonymous said...

Hi you don't know me but i'm a year six boy from Robartes junior school and that is absolutely brillo-whizz!
I hate cliffhangers so please, please write some more to that!
Brandon.

P. S. please!