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Wednesday 19 November 2008

"Welcome to the Haunted House" by Sarah N, Age 8, Class 4

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WELCOME TO THE HAUNTED HOUSE!

Step in through the old gates,
Be as quiet as a mouse,
We’re going to sneak,
And take a peek,
Inside the haunted house!


Ghosts hoot in the hallway.
Ghouls lurk on the stairs.
Imps and spirits
Have pillow fights
To catch you’re unawares!


An empty piece of armour
Clanks loudly down the hall.
A wizard bakes
Revolting cakes
You wouldn’t like at all!


So, now you’ve had a quick peek
Be as quiet as a mouse.
And tiptoe out
While you still can-
Escape the haunted house!!!!

WA,HA,HA,HAA


By Sarah N
Age: 8
Class: year 4

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4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well done!!!

Anonymous said...

Very good Sarah I loved your Welcome to the haunted house.

Anonymous said...

Fantastic Viking story! I loved the simile of the boat like a snake, well done. Mrs K

Anonymous said...

Well done Sarah. Your Haunted house
poem is brilliant!!!