Updates....

*****************************************
IN PREPARATION FOR KERNOW INK PLEASE NOW USE THIS NEW EMAIL: kernowink@googlemail.com

*****************************************


Friday 14 November 2008

"All About a Roman" by Charley M, Age 9, Class 5sp

******************************
"ALL ABOUT A ROMAN"


Dear Diary,
It is the day of our first battle and we are getting ready. I am terrified. I waited patiently as the mad Celts charged towards us. We threw our spears and marched towards them. I tripped over my best friends body, but I told myself I can't be upset now there's a fight to be won. The battle went on and more Romans died. I saw my leader get stabbed and fall to the floor in pain. I wondered if I was next. I didn't know that battle was so upsetting and violent, but as I've signed up for the army I have to stay in for 25 years. Finally the battle ended and the Romans won !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FROM OPUS MELODIOUSE



BY CHARLEY M
Age 9
Class 5sp
****************************

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow charely thats really good well done Maylah 6h

Anonymous said...

Charley thats veryyy good!Congrats on being the first one too write !

Tia 5sp

Anonymous said...

well done charley lots of love mum xx