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Tuesday, 18 November 2008

"The Whisper" by Tia W, Age 9, Class 5sp

Old buildings have lots of history and sometimes there are myths and legends about ghosts that reside in them. In these tales the ghosts themselves may form part of the building's history. Tia has written a story based on this idea:
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The Whisper

I waited silently. I knew the sound, it was common in my old house. The spirits and ghosts whisper constantly. Once I tried to find where the sounds were coming from. I was guessing the cellar as it's somewhere I was forbidden to go. My Mother and Father said I couldn't because they didn't know what was down there. That made me all the more curious. Eventually my curiosity got the better of me and as I edged open the creaky cellar door I was pulled with an almighty force into the darkness ...

By Tia W
Age 9
Class 5sp
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Monday, 17 November 2008

"The Old Tin Mine" by Nadia R, Age 10, Class 5sw

The following is an idea for a book setting by Nadia R.

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The Old Tin Mine

Crackling and hissing filled the air. Somebody was walking around the old tin mine. The Gatekeeper shrugged on his coat and walked out into the pouring rain. As he got close a piercing scream filled the night.


By Nadia R
Age 10 years
Class: 5sw

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"The Great Fire of London' by Nadia R, Age 10, Class 5sw

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The following is an idea for a book by Nadia R:

The Great Fire of London


The fire blazed on and on,it was never ending. People were ordered out of their homes to try and block the fire's way. Women were carrying children and belongings, whilst the men dealt with the fire. Everywhere children and babies were screaming and crying. The smell of smoke was burning my nostrils. But I just watched and listened.


By Nadia R
Age 10 years

Class:5sw
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Friday, 14 November 2008

"All About a Roman" by Charley M, Age 9, Class 5sp

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"ALL ABOUT A ROMAN"


Dear Diary,
It is the day of our first battle and we are getting ready. I am terrified. I waited patiently as the mad Celts charged towards us. We threw our spears and marched towards them. I tripped over my best friends body, but I told myself I can't be upset now there's a fight to be won. The battle went on and more Romans died. I saw my leader get stabbed and fall to the floor in pain. I wondered if I was next. I didn't know that battle was so upsetting and violent, but as I've signed up for the army I have to stay in for 25 years. Finally the battle ended and the Romans won !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FROM OPUS MELODIOUSE



BY CHARLEY M
Age 9
Class 5sp
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