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Saturday, 6 December 2008
"Snow" by Ellen N, Age 10, Class 6b
SNOW
Snow No colour at all Or maybe it does Wait and it will come
By Ellen N Age 10 Class 6b
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
Wow Ellen thats really good. The way you put snow down the side is really clever. Keep writing
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1 comment:
Wow Ellen thats really good. The way you put snow down the side is really clever. Keep writing
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